托福獨立寫作舉例類型有哪些?
我們可以簡單提出幾種舉例子的類型,以免大家在獨立寫作中都曬出“大表哥”LOL
個人的例子確實是獨立寫作在每一個支持段中舉例子的首選,基于普通考生一般會寫2-3個支持段,所以每一個支持段都要舉例子的話,我們建議只在一個支持段中編造個人的例子會比較好,其它兩個支持段就不是很建議都是“個人”例子了,因為要避免重復和刻板化。
接下來我會給大家一些支持段的示范。
1.個人的例子主要指的是如某個朋友,親戚,名人的事件,需要點名道姓,把這個人的所作所為在50-70字說清楚,不需要例舉這個人的一生,而是把他身上能體現(xiàn)今天文章主題的內(nèi)容陳述清楚即可。例如:
題目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers aremore appreciated now than they were in the past.
示范:不同意
In addition, teachers are not the only wayin which people obtain academic knowledge. 此處省略展開3-4句解釋分論點+For instance,my cousin Jack, a senior high school student, usually searches physics coursesonline in order to make up for what she does not understand in the class ratherthan asking teachers. In this way, she studies in a high efficiency with thehelp of the internet access, and clearly, the exclusiveness of teachers nolonger exists today.
2.我們還可以寫數(shù)據(jù)+復數(shù)人稱當主語的例子,數(shù)據(jù)例子大家都不陌生,編造一個官方機構(gòu),給出一個較為客觀的數(shù)據(jù)即可。這時候往往會覺得字數(shù)過少,因此我建議可以在數(shù)據(jù)例子后面加上一個復數(shù)人稱當做主語的群體例子,例子描述一個具體事情作為例子疊加;或者,我們也可以在數(shù)據(jù)例子后面具體點明在這個數(shù)據(jù)中,有多少人車持有什么觀點,增加真實性。例如:
題目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universitiesshould invest more money on famous teachers rather than advanced devices.
示范:同意
First of all, famous teachers can win moreattraction of students.此處省略展開3-4句解釋分論點+For example, Harvard University get thousands of applicationletters every year from all over the world, and the most important reason isthat there are many great professors, especially in chemistry and psychologydepartment. A recent research in Reuters claimed that over 65% of applicantswere into the famous teaching resource of Harvard, some of whom also airedtheir admiration for professors and doctors who have published many patents andthesis in certain areas. Therefore, the high popularity of famous teachers in auniversity benefits the enrollment.
3.如果我們想寫反襯的例子,也就是通過黑反方來支持正方,可以選擇寫“假設(shè)”的例子,這樣就不會不禮貌地揭露他人的隱私。模板句型如下:
l Just imagine what would be like if…
l It is not hard to consider a situation that…
l Suppose a condition that…
題目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universitiesshould prepare students for the workplace.
示范:不同意
First of all, preparing students for theworkplace may restrain their potentials. 此處省略展開3-4句解釋分論點+Justimagine a student who is good at people interaction is however prepared by hisuniversity to learn accounting. As a result, he may not be satisfied with hiswork as an accountant in a company and also waste his talent in communication.Instead, if he could learn more comprehensive skills according to personalfeatures, he would make a name in other areas such as human resource.
4.最后一種介紹給大家的是排比的例子類型,因為ETS會覺得能寫出名詞,動詞,或者句子的三個同樣形式連用的考生更有語言能力,大家在這個類型中可以量力而為,因為不是所有題都能寫三個句子,每一個句子描述一個事情,三個句子就是三個例子的疊加來支持你的分論點。
題目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Politicalleaders bring more benefit to the society than entertainers do.
示范:同意
First of all, political leaders can benefitthe society on each aspect than great artists do. 此處省略展開3-4句解釋分論點+Forinstance, when a country witnesses economic crisis, political leaders areones who figure out solutions to help people out of economic loss; whenunemployment rate is too high in a country, political leaders offer moreworking positions; when people meet difficulty in seeing doctors, politicalleaders make policies in healthcare.
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