本文托福綜合寫作題目為該不該設立保護森林基金(2015年9月17日托福考試寫作)
| Topic 議題:該不該設立基金來定期撥錢保護森林 | ||
| Reading | Listening | |
| Thesis 總論點 | A fund should be established to make regular payments for forests. | The payment can not bring about these there benefits mentioned in the reading |
| Sub-point 1 分論點1 | Reducing agricultural damage by preventing farmers from using forests as farmland for agriculture. | If forests are not allowed to be transformed into farmlands, food will be deficient. In order to generate more food, intensive methods will be used, thus aggravating damage. |
| Sub-point2 分論點2 | Helping the habitants living in the forest. | The payment will not improve the forest habitants’ lives for money are first received by local government and landlords who are not forest villagers. |
| Sub-point 3 分論點3 | Promoting biodiversity. | Biodiversity can not be improved for those payment will be used for plantation forest, man-made one, in which only trees of great commercial use are planted, for example, in some plantation forest only tung trees and walnut trees grow. |
托福綜合寫作范文Sample answer:
The reading appeals to the view that establishing a fund to make regular payments for forests is a plausible suggestion for it can protect environment. However, the professor refutes the three benefits mentioned in the reading.
Firstly, the reading holds that such suggestion can reduce agricultural damage by preventing farmers from using forests as farmlands for agriculture. The professor disagrees with this by suggesting that if forests are not allowed to be transformed into farmlands, food will be deficient. In order to generate more food, intensive technology will be used, thus aggravating damage to environment.
Secondly, by illustrating the fact that local governments and landlords who are not forest villagers will first receive the payment, the professor refutes the reading’s claim that the payment can improve the forest habitants’ lives.
Finally, in the reading passage, it explains that the plan can promote biodiversity. In contrast, the professor holds that biodiversity will not be improved because the payment will be used for plantation forest, man-made one, in which only trees of great commercial use will be planted. For example, in some plantation forests only tung trees and walnut trees grow.
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