托福寫作常見的語法錯誤都有哪些?
1. 不完整句子(Fragments)
不完整句子指的是句子當中缺少主語或謂語等,無法形成一個完整的句子。
比如:A movie that inspires deep emotions.(只有名詞加定語從句,不是完整的句子)
應改為:She went to see “The Silver Star”, a movie that inspires deep emotions.
2. 不間斷句子(Run-on Sentences)
不間斷句子指的是用逗號來連接兩個完整的句子。
比如:There is increasingly widespread reliance on electronic mail, some people still resist using it, especially those who prefer handwritten letters.
應改為:Although there is increasingly widespread reliance on electronic mail, some people still resist using it, especially those who prefer handwritten letters.(根據兩句之間的關系,加入連詞)
3. 主謂不一致(Subject-verb Disagreement)
主謂不一致指的是句子中主語與謂語沒有保持數的一致。
比如:Many students thinks tomorrow is a holiday.
應改為:Many students think tomorrow is a holiday.
再比如:The use of cell phones during concerts are not allowed.
應改為:The use of cell phones during concerts is not allowed.
4. 可數名詞“裸奔”
可數名詞“裸奔”指的是可數名詞之前沒有冠詞,也沒有變為復數形式。
比如:Even expert or scholar specializing in a certain field might cover a vast spectrum of knowledge in order to succeed.
應改為:Even experts or scholars specializing in a certain field might cover a vast spectrum of knowledge in order to succeed.(可數名詞變復數形式)
5. but/ however
but和however都表示轉折,但是but是連詞,而however是副詞,也就是說however是不能來連接兩個獨立分句的。
比如:Printed books are limited in space, however, space is not an issue for electronic ones.
應改為:Printed books are limited in space. However, space is not an issue for electronic ones. (用句號將原句分成兩個獨立分句)
6. therefore
therefore也是副詞,表示“因此”,它也不能連接兩個獨立分句。
比如:Pupils always look to their teacher for guidance, therefore the influence that a teacher has could never be underestimated.
應改為:Pupils always look to their teacher for guidance; therefore the influence that a teacher has could never be underestimated.(用分號將兩個獨立分句連接起來)
或者:Pupils always look to their teacher for guidance, and therefore the influence that a teacher has could never be underestimated.(用and將兩個獨立分句連接起來)
7. there be句型
there be句型中be動詞本身已經是謂語部分,不能再出現謂語動詞。
比如:There are many people prefer to wear clothes made of natural fibers.
應改為:There are many people who prefer to wear clothes made of natural fibers.(后面prefer to改放到定語從句里)
8. 比較對象的對等
在比較結構中,注意前后比較事物要對等。常用that和those來指代“比較結構”里先前提到的名詞。
比如:The merits of serious movies far outweigh funny movies.
應改為:The merits of serious movies far outweigh those of funny movies.(those指代的是前半句的比較對象merits)
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