托福寫作中obviously該怎么用?

【替換】
第一句句子中,obviously表示 “明顯地”;
第二句句子中,it becomes obvious that... 結(jié)構(gòu)也表示 “明顯地”;
兩者之間可以進(jìn)行簡單的替換
如:

如:

【陷阱】
在托福寫作中 obvious/clear/apparent 以及 obviously/clearly/apparently 較少地使用在學(xué)術(shù)寫作之中
寫作的目的在于告訴讀者所不知道的內(nèi)容,既然是 “明顯地”,那么也就沒有必要告訴讀者了。
因此,在寫作中,需要慎用與obvious/obviously相似,表示“明顯地”單詞。
原句改寫:
Language games allow children to practice and strengthen their language skills.
同樣,在學(xué)術(shù)寫作中,較少使用 in fact, as a matter of fact, actually 等短語。
【例外】

與表示“明顯地”obviously 不同的是,表示“重要地”important 更具有 “主觀”的要素和判斷
作者認(rèn)為重要的內(nèi)容并非是讀者“習(xí)以為然”重要的內(nèi)容,因?yàn)樽髡咝枰獜?qiáng)調(diào)內(nèi)容的重要性。

其他具有 “主觀性”,且經(jīng)常使用的副詞,還有:
Unsurprisingly, ... ;
Interestingly, ... ;
Undoubtedly/Undeniably, ... ;
Basically, ... ;
······
這些詞是可以在學(xué)術(shù)寫作中使用的,如:
Undoubtedly/Undeniably, younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.
Basically, governments should spend more money supporting the arts than athletics, such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.
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